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-I am an engineer and artist at the intersection of humans and technology.
+I am an engineer/artist exploring human technology.
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 In my day job I find novel uses for interactive, immersive and games technology for training and simulation.
-I am passionate about free and open source software, and the importance of developing technologies that serve everyone.
+I am passionate about free and open source software, and the importance of developing tools that serve everyone.
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-I tinker for fun and make things when I can, inspired by physics, the universe and boundaries. I am currently most enamoured by optics, orbital mechanics and relativity.
+I tinker for fun and when I can, make things inspired by physics, the universe and boundaries, physical, imagined or otherwise.
+I am currently most enamoured by optics, orbital mechanics and relativity.
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-Besides computing, I like caring for my plants, photography, and studying language, culture and philosophy. I take an interest in fashion, makeup and self-presentation, and regularly go to see live music. 
+Besides computing, I like caring for my plants, photography, and studying language, culture and philosophy. 
+I explore fashion, makeup, gender expression and regularly see live music.
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