diff --git a/src/root/about.html b/src/root/about.html
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-<h1>hi, i'm cat</h1>
+<h1>Hi, I'm Cat</h1>
 
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+<!--
 by day i work with hardware, software and people finding useful things to do with immersive technology. for professional inquiries, please find me on <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/cat-flynn-08751611b/">linkedin</a>.
+-->
+
+By day I work with hardware, software and people finding useful things to do with immersive technology.
+For professional inquiries, please fine me on <a href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/cat-flynn-08751611b/">LinkedIn</a>.
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+<!--
 by night, i create. often it's <a href="https://ktyl.itch.io/">games</a> or <a href="https://github.com/ktyldev/">code</a>, but i am also interested in photography, writing, drawing, and making music. this website is to share those things. i'm working on building it out at the moment, so for now please just enjoy some things i've made in the <a href="gallery.html">gallery</a>!
+-->
+
+By night, I create.
+Often it's <a href="https://ktyl.itch.io/">games</a> or <a href="https://github.com/ktyldev/">code</a>, but I am also interested in photography, writing, drawing, and making music.
+This website is to share those things.
+I'm working on building it out at the moment, so for now please just enjoy some things I've made in the <a href="gallery.html">gallery</a>!
+
+
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diff --git a/src/root/gallery.html b/src/root/gallery.html
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 <div class="page portfolio">
 
-<h1><span class="glass">ray tracing<span></h1>
-<p><span class="glass">optics are beautiful, fascinating and fun to code</span></p>
+<h1><span class="glass">Ray Tracing<span></h1>
+<p><span class="glass">Optics are beautiful, fascinating and fun to code!</span></p>
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@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@
 
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-<h1><span class="glass">games</span></h1>
-<p><span class="glass">a credit in each, but not each my own</span></p>
+<h1><span class="glass">Games</span></h1>
+<p><span class="glass">For clients, jams and the experience.</span></p>
 
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-<h1><span class="glass">abstract</span></h1>
-<p><span class="glass">sometimes it just happens</span></p>
+<h1><span class="glass">Abstract</span></h1>
+<p><span class="glass">Sometimes it just happens!</span></p>
 
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