diff --git a/blogs/2024/4/27/interactive-astrodynamics.md b/blogs/2024/4/27/interactive-astrodynamics.md
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@@ -177,10 +177,10 @@ In a thousand years, the smallest step we can represent is still less than a mic
 After a million years, the minimum increment finally creeps up to half a millisecond, which sounds about right.
 
 With a grin, you add a healthy number of zeroes, aim, and throw.
-You watch the ball disappear over the horizon - it does so much more quickly than last time, and sit down.
-You turn around, sit down, and looking at your watch, start to crank up the passage of time itself.
-You watch as the ball comes back around... and around, and around, and around again, until it becomes a steady blur over your head.
-It stays that way, and you start to think about double doubles.
+You watch the ball disappear over the horizon - it does so much more quickly than last time - and turn around to await its return.
+Sitting down, you look at your watch, start to crank up the passage of time itself.
+You watch as the ball comes back around... and around, and around, and around again, until it becomes a steady blur over your head, and your mind starts to wander.
+You start to think about double doubles.
 You've come a long way, but what's a million years, when you're a planet?
 
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